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Incorrect Published Information (Formal Letter)

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  Dear Sir or Madam,  I am writing this letter with reference to the article published about Lahore in your magazine. I wish to notify you that some of the information in the article is not correct.  As per the article, Lahore’s Orange Line Project has been completed but as a matter of fact it is still in progress and will be finished in the next few months. Please update the records accordingly for future references.  I understand your magazine is appreciated across Europe. Hence, I believe, it is vital to make sure the information being published is correct as such mistakes can cause harm to the reputation and the rating of the magazine.  I would like to suggest you to publish a notification of correction in the upcoming number of the magazine mentioning the mistake that happened in the previous version. I am confident that this approach will restore the level of confidence and respect the readers have for the magazine.  In case any further information or...

Cookery Course (Formal Letter)

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  You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.  To: Course Director.  What you enjoyed about the course How much cooking you have done since then?  Suggest another cooking course you would like the school to offer Dear Sir or Madam,  I recently took part in the “Cooking for Beginners” cookery course and have received a request by your office to share my feedback on it.  First of all, allow me to appreciate the instructors at your training center. They were very friendly and supportive throughout the course and even shared their personal experiences which was quite helpful.  Please note that since I have finished the course, I am now cooking confidently and regularly at home, and have even hosted a small get together for friends. I am also trying out new recipes on my own.  I would like to suggest the school management to look into the possibility of organizing a course on baking as several...

Sponsoring a local children’s sports team (Formal Letter)

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  A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.  Write a letter to the company. In your letter 1. Describe the benefits of sponsoring the team  2. Summarize the benefits of paying for the concerts 3. Say how you think the company should spend the money  Dear Sir or Madam,  This letter is with reference to the request of feedback received regarding the budget allocation for the town of Yorkshire.  As mentioned in the press release, your organization is considering sponsorship of The Saint Morris School’s sports team. I believe it will be very beneficial for the local students as they are anxiously waiting for an opportunity to develop their sporting skills and play at bigger leagues. This way the school’s financial constraints will also be addressed.  The second optio...