IELTS with Adeel

  Type: Agree/ Disagree Introduction: Paraphrase + agree/disagree + 2 reasons Para 1: Details of reason 1 (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Para 2: Details of reason 2 (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Conclusion: Paraphrase of thesis statement Type: Problem & Solution Introduction: Paraphrase + 2 causes + 2 solutions Para 1: 2 causes (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Para 2: 2 solutions (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Conclusion: Paraphrase of thesis statement Type: Advantages/ Disadvantages Introduction: Paraphrase+ 2 advantages + 2 disadvantages Para 1: 2 advantages (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Para 2: 2 disadvantages (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Conclusion: Paraphrase of thesis statement Type: Outweigh Advantages/ Disadvantages Introduction: Paraphrase+ 1 advantage or disadvantage + 2 disadvantages or 2 advantages Para 1: 1 advantage or disadvantage (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Para 2: 1 advantage or disadvantage (Topic sentence+Explana...

  In many cities of the world, traffic congestion is a serious problem. What are the causes and what can be done about it? Traffic jams in urban areas are becoming a serious concern for people around the world. This is usually caused by the increase in vehicles on the road and improper traffic management. Some key solutions to this include encouraging the use of public transport, and implementing strict control measures through traffic police.  There are several causes of traffic congestion in cities with the number of vehicles on the road being a major contributing factor. In other words, the more automobiles on the road the more chances of being stuck in traffic. While, automotive sector, in order to boost their sales, launch and promote new car and bike models every year, the roads and infrastructure do not expand accordingly. Hence, this disproportion in the growth of the two interlinked factors result in traffic jams. For example, cities in Pakistan witnessed a significan...

  Art: 1.        For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art? 2.        The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 3.        Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree? Education: 1.        Tuition for healthy children usually has top priority in most countries. However, teac...

 IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Essay: Many people today are worried about young children using video games. What problems might these games cause, for children and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced? The almost universal availability of video games among children has presented us with a number of challenges and decisions, none of which are straightforward. I believe there are three main problems associated with these products, and also three remedies we can adopt. Perhaps the major problem we need to deal with is the level of violence found in these games. Many of them feature aggressive or warlike characters, ranging from soldiers to criminals and killers. This inevitably leads children to believe that such behaviour is normal, or even desirable. A second issue is the obsessive way that some children use the games – for example, preferring their computers to real friendships, making these children isolated and socially naive. Finally, there are physical effects ...