IELTS with Adeel

  Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians, or sports stars) are paid too much money.  Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid? ——————————————————————————————————————— It is observed that celebrities are paid very handsome money. I completely agree that celebrities are paid too much money because they entertain a large audience. However, teachers and police officers should also be highly paid. Film stars and other public figures make a lot of money because they entertain the masses at a time. This is the main reason they get paid this much money. Additionally, if a film star or an athlete is able to engage thousands of people and these people are paying to watch that star, then they deserve to be paid accordingly. For instance, Babar Azam, who is the number one batsman in Pakistan right now, is being paid half a million rupees for each match. This is mainly because a lot of people come to watch him play, and he attrac...

  Type: Agree/ Disagree Introduction: Paraphrase + agree/disagree + 2 reasons Para 1: Details of reason 1 (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Para 2: Details of reason 2 (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Conclusion: Paraphrase of thesis statement Type: Problem & Solution Introduction: Paraphrase + 2 causes + 2 solutions Para 1: 2 causes (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Para 2: 2 solutions (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Conclusion: Paraphrase of thesis statement Type: Advantages/ Disadvantages Introduction: Paraphrase+ 2 advantages + 2 disadvantages Para 1: 2 advantages (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Para 2: 2 disadvantages (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Conclusion: Paraphrase of thesis statement Type: Outweigh Advantages/ Disadvantages Introduction: Paraphrase+ 1 advantage or disadvantage + 2 disadvantages or 2 advantages Para 1: 1 advantage or disadvantage (Topic sentence+Explanation+Example) Para 2: 1 advantage or disadvantage (Topic sentence+Explana...

  1.The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?   It is believed that financing activities related to art, music and theatre by governments is misspending and these investments should be rather spent on public services. I strongly disagree with this because these creative activities promote tourism as well as keep the mental well-being of people in a better state. 2. While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree?   It is claimed that during the hiring process, more importance should be given to individual attributes of a new recruit, instead of educational and professional background. In my opinion, qualifications and previous work experience are of increased consideration because an em...

  The teaching of Information Technology (computers) has become a standard part of the curriculum in most secondary schools. The same is now happening in primary schools, where children as young as six are learning how to use computers. However, there is a danger that IT skills are being taught at the expense of more basic skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It has been observed that technology-related modules are not only being taught in a significant number of high schools, but now they are also a part of the syllabus in educational institutes teaching much younger children. Some people fear that this shift in the course structure is compromising other essential skills. I disagree with this perspective as it has become vital to be able to properly use technology in our daily lives and also the fact that teaching material should be modified based on the challenges anticipated in the future.  During the last decade, computers have become an integral part of our ev...

  Many serial dramas on TV (e.g. ‘soap operas’ or ‘soaps’) play an important social role. Do you agree or disagree? It is believed that television serials have a key role to play in a society. I agree with this belief not only due to the fact that these programs promote positivity but they also highlight issues that exist in a society.  Dramas on television are often found to be promoting happy thoughts among the audience. Since people seek entertainment from such shows, the themes are generally found to be uplifting. In other words, while these programs serve as a tool to bring the family members together, they also lighten up the mood of the ones watching. A good example to further elaborate my point of view would be sitcoms. They prove to be a source of a good laugh after a hectic day at work and as a result they promote a positive vibe among individuals and families.  Another key role being played by such programs is that they are found to be uncovering issues in a so...

  1. Governments should spend more money on providing STEM education in schools than on music and art because employers need more people with a STEM background than music or art. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? It is being argued that governments should prioritize STEM education on arts subjects when it comes to the budget allocations for schools. I agree with this considering the employability requirements and also the fact that STEM education relates to hard skills which demand proper teaching and trainings.   Budget allocations are usually prioritized based on the benefit anticipated from the spent. Same is the case with the education sector, with employers requiring certain skills from the applicants, it creates a demand for the supply of those particular individuals in the job market. Hence, it becomes a responsibility of the government to ensure that the required talent is present in the labour pool. Therefore, this high spent on in-demand...

  Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? It is often argued that when it comes to facing challenges as grownups, children raised in families with financial constraints out-perform ones with a wealthy background. I agree with this because of the fact that less fortunate children are found to spend wisely, and they also believe in self-reliance. A common issue being faced by many adults is managing the expenditure. In other words, nowadays, spending money is considered as important as earning it. Individuals who come from a lower middle-class background have spent their youth with limited resources and finances, this causes, or rather forces, them to be cautious in spending money. As a result, even after growing up, the habits of smart spending remain embedded in the sub-conscious p...

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is true that some celebrities are known for their glamorous lifestyles rather than for the work they do. While I agree that these celebrities set a bad example for children, I believe that other famous people act as positive role models. On the one hand, many people do achieve fame without really working for it. They may have inherited money from parents, married a famous or wealthy person, or they may have appeared in gossip magazines or on a reality TV programme. A good example would be Paris Hilton, who is rich and famous for the wrong reasons. She spends her time attending parties and nightclubs, and her behaviour promotes the idea that appearance, glamour and media profile are more important than hard work and good character. The message to young people is that success can be achi...

Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? In recent years, extreme sports have become increasingly popular, and some people argue that governments should prohibit them. I completely disagree with the idea that these sports are too dangerous, and I therefore believe that they should not be banned. In my opinion, so-called extreme sports are not as dangerous as many people think. All sports involve some element of risk, and there should always be clear regulations and safety procedures to reduce the possibility of accidents. People who take part in extreme sports are usually required to undergo appropriate training so that the dangers are minimised. For example, anyone who wants to try skydiving will need to sign up for lessons with a registered club, and beginners are not allowed to dive solo; they must be accompanied by an experienced professional. Finally, the protective equipment and t...

  Art: 1.        For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art? 2.        The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 3.        Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree? Education: 1.        Tuition for healthy children usually has top priority in most countries. However, teac...