Celebrities (Agree or Disagree Essay)


Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their
achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


It is true that some celebrities are known for their glamorous lifestyles rather than for the

work they do. While I agree that these celebrities set a bad example for children, I believe

that other famous people act as positive role models.


On the one hand, many people do achieve fame without really working for it. They may

have inherited money from parents, married a famous or wealthy person, or they may have

appeared in gossip magazines or on a reality TV programme. A good example would be

Paris Hilton, who is rich and famous for the wrong reasons. She spends her time attending

parties and nightclubs, and her behaviour promotes the idea that appearance, glamour and

media profile are more important than hard work and good character. The message to

young people is that success can be achieved easily, and that school work is not necessary.


On the other hand, there are at least as many celebrities whose accomplishments make

them excellent role models for young people. Actors, musicians and sports stars become

famous idols because they have worked hard and applied themselves to develop real skills

and abilities. They demonstrate great effort, determination and ambition, which is required

for someone who wants to be truly successful in their chosen field. An example is the actor

and martial artist Jackie Chan, who has become world famous through years of practice and

hard work. This kind of self-made celebrity can inspire children to develop their talents

through application and perseverance.


In conclusion, it seems to me that the influence of celebrities on young people can be

positive as well as negative.

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